They say love and trust go hand in hand
I give you my trust
If you love me
You wont break it
Will you?
But if you do
Does it mean you love me any less?
Do i have to love you any less?
The feeling
Of hurt
Disappointment
Emptiness
Sadness
The fact you ripped me appart...
It makes all thoes feelings flourish
Like a rose
They blossum
Into beautiful fits
Bolts of rage
Cloudy emotion
That drop tears
My emptyness flows like a river
My sorow sprouts a fountain
And bitterness infects my skies
And you
Where does it get you
A higher social status?
A place?
In a vicious chain
A "friend"
A pal to gossip with
Does breaking our trust
Our love
Release bitterness you hold tward me?
Does a feeling of accomplishment wash over you
A high tide of self indulgeing rage
A sun ray of pride
A field of spitefull weeds
To fill a vace
Placed in the empty spot i left in your heart
After your fit
Do you feel better?
Was it all worth it
What you felt was meaningless
I try to tell myself
Your high tide
Was a cry for help
Your ray of pride
Was emotion waiting to be held
Your vace of weeds
Was clutter
Something to occupie you
That empty void
Is a space for me
And only me
So
We get down to it...
Do i love you any less...?
No
Do you love me any less...?
Well, thats for you to decide
I really really loved this Carly. Everything that you write really speaks to me in ways I really can't describe. Its very deep, has so much emotion, and it's depicted with very very vivid metaphors and pictures. I really enjoy your writing, and this one is one of my favorites. I'm glad that you can get all you feel out in such a creative outlet. Great Job, and thanks for sharing :)
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